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Friday, March 18, 2011

Now THIS is a lovely poem...

A LOVELY POEM

i can't help saying i think the last four lines are unnecessary, though, and bring the whole piece down a notch.
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2 comments:

Regena said...

I agree....lovely and last lines bring it down.

6:23 AM
Regena said...

I agree. Lovely....last lines diminish

6:24 AM

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